Daily Challenge Check-in: July 9, 2015

Words/Time: 1 hour, revising “Pithea.” Transportation vagueness has been cleaned up. Aeldrim has rightfully stayed where they found him, rather than traveling with the group only to leave and go back where they found him a few minutes later, for no real purpose. And Blackthore has another chance to tell Missy how he found out something was going on and came to help, a conversation that will be made less confusing by Missy actually knowing who Drear is already.

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