Daily Challenge Check-in: July 16, 2015

Words/Time: 911 words, revising “Pithea.” Missy’s retelling of events is a little more detailed now, which may or may not be okay. After a few sections of actual dialogue when Missy tells part of the story and Naolin reacts, it speeds through the rest with little more than a, “She told the rest of the story, and he interrupted a few more times.” So it may be too abrupt, but I’ll wait until the TCSTB gets to that part to worry about it.

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